前面的文章里面我们提到了关于小学生英语写作的重要性和提高的方法。其中有一个方法是，对优秀的范文进行仿写，然后模仿多了自己的写作能力就自然有提高。现在我们就来给大家准备了，适合小学四年级学生进行模仿的优秀英语范文。家长们可以进行相关的整理，打印下来让孩子先读后仿写。然后跟孩子一起看孩子写作的方向和内容与范文的差异在哪里，进行针对性地提高。

1、一个大大的惊喜

Today, when I go home after school, I see my grandparents, they come to visit me. I am so happy, it is such a big surprise for me, I miss them so much, because I haven’t seen them for a long time. My grandparents bring me a lot of snacks, they know I love these snacks. I hope my grandparents will stay for some time.

今天，当我放学回家后，我看到了祖父母，他们来看望我。我很开心，这对于我来说是一个很大的惊喜，我很想念他们，因为我已经很长一段时间没有看到他们了。我的祖父母给我带来了很多零食，他们知道我喜欢这些零食。我希望我的祖父母能够留下来住一段时间。

 

2、我想去的地方

My summer holiday is coming soon, I start to make some plans about my vacation. I go to travel every year, this time, I want to travel to Tibet, it is the place I always want to go to. I have heard about Tibet many times, my mother’s friends tell me so many wonderful things in it, so I want to go to Tibet. This summer I will go to Tibet. 　

我的暑假很快就要到来了，我开始为我的暑假指定了一些计划。我每年都去旅行，这一次，我想要去西藏旅游，那也是我一直想要去的地方。我经常听到有关西藏的事情，我妈妈的朋友告诉我很多关于那里的美好事情，所以我想要去西藏。这个夏天我将要去西藏。

 

3、如果我有一双翅膀

I always imagine how nice if I can fly, I am so free, I can fly to the place I want to go to. If I have the wing, I will fly to my hometown and see its beautiful scenery, the trees must be so green and the water must be so clean. I also want to fly to the Great Wall, I have heard about it long time ago, I want to appreciate its beauty. 　

我总是想象如果我能飞，那该多好啊，我能飞去我想要去的地方。如果我有一双翅膀，我会飞去家乡，看看它美丽的风景，树肯定油绿，水也肯定很清澈。我也想要飞去长城，我在很久之前就听说过长城，我想要欣赏它的美丽。

 

5、读书笔记

Since I go to school, I start to form the habit of noting what I have read. I found it is very helpful for me, because I get bad memory, I will forget what I have learned in the class soon, so my teacher asks me write down what I get. Now, after class, I will open the note, go over what I have learned. 　　

打从我上学起，我开始养成了记下我所读到的一切的习惯。我发现这对我很有用，因为我的记忆力不好，我会很快就忘记了在课上学到的，因此我的老师叫我记下所学到的。现在，我会在课后打开笔记，复习所学到的。

 

5、我的假日

May Day is coming. I?m so happy because my father and my mother take me to WuQuan Park this holiday. In the park, I see many trees and beautiful flowers. There are many children and many happy playing games, too.

My parents take me to the zoo. There are lions, tigers, eagles, bears, deer, monkeys, and so on. I like the monkeys best because they are very clever and they make us laugh. How lovely they are!

I have a good time that day. What a beautiful and happy holiday.

五一节即将来临。我很开心,因为我的父亲和我的母亲带我去五圈公园这个节日。在公园里,我看到很多树和美丽的花朵。有许多孩子在快乐的玩游戏,。

我的父母带我去动物园。有狮子、老虎、鹰、熊、鹿、猴子等等。我最喜欢猴子,因为他们非常聪明，他们让我们开怀大笑。他们是多么可爱啊!

那天我玩得很开心，多么美好快乐的假日啊。

 

6、学校运动会

Our school holds the sports meeting today.There are a lot of students and they are very happy.The athletes are very nervous. They take part in the high jump,long jump and so on. The competition begins.The students run very fast on the playground.The others are saying come on to their classmates and couraging them. We lost the game at last,but we are still very happy.

中文：今天学校举行校运会，来学校的学生很多，大家都很高兴。参加比赛的学生很紧张，有参加跳高，跳远的，，， 比赛开始了，同学们在操场上快速的跑着，别的同学也都为比自己同学加油，可是比赛结果我们班输了。 但是这次给我们带来了快乐。

 

7、好的学习习惯很重要

Mathematics was too difficult for me, the teacher spoke so fast that I could not understand. I failed every math exam, my dad was very angry, he wouldn't let me watch TV, or let me go out, I was very sad. The math teacher always asks me to go to the office and tell me the problem. I am not afraid to make mistakes, because I can correct them. I keep practicing, speed up my problem, and don't forget to preview and review. In the most recent exam, I achieved excellent results in maths. A good learner has many good learning habits.

数学对我来说太难了，老师讲的太快，以至于我不能听懂。每次数学考试我都不及格，我的爸爸很生气，他不让我看电视，也不让我出去玩，我很难过。数学老师总是让我去办公室，给我讲题。我开始不害怕犯错，因为我还可以改正。我不断的练习，加快了我的做题速度，并且不忘记预习和复习。在最近的一次考试里，我的数学成绩达到了优秀。一个好的学习者有很多好的学习习惯。

 

8、我爱运动

My name is Jim and I have a strong body because I often play sports. I love sports, and exercise makes me a healthy body. My favorite sport is playing basketball, and I worship Jordan very much because he plays basketball well. Every day when I finish my homework, I will watch sports programs on TV. Every weekend, I will go to play basketball with my friends. Sports make me feel relaxed and have a good mood.

我的名字叫吉姆，我有一个强壮的身体，因为我经常进行体育运动。我热爱运动，运动使我有一个健康的身体。我最喜欢的体育运动是打篮球，而且我非常崇拜乔丹，因为他篮球打的好。每天写完作业我都会在电视上看体育节目，每当周末，我会和朋友一起去打篮球。体育运动使我感到放松并拥有愉快的心情。

　　

9、节约用水

I used to pouring away the water directly after I using it. Someday, my mother asked me to help her wash the clothes, as I was about to pour away the water, my mother stopped me and she told me that most water can be recycled. It can be used to water the flower or to wash other things. From then on, I realize how to save water.

我过去常常在用完水后直接倒掉水。有一天，妈妈叫我帮助她洗衣服，就在我要去倒掉水的时候，妈妈阻止了我，她告诉我说大部分水可以循环利用。那么水可以用来浇花或者洗别的东西。从那时候起，我就意识到如何节约用水。

 

10、美味的晚餐

Tonight, my mother invite her friends to come to dinner. So my mother prepare a lot of food, she even cooks the new food, which I never taste before. My mother’s friends praise her a lot, which makes my mother so happy. The food my mother cooks is so delicious, I love to eat them so much. I am so happy to have such a good mother.

今晚，我妈妈邀请她的朋友来吃晚饭。因此妈妈准备了很多的食物,她甚至煮了新的饭菜，只是我以前从来没有尝过的。妈妈的朋友们都赞美她，这让她很高兴。妈妈煮的食物，非常美味，我喜欢吃。我很高兴有这样一个好妈妈。

 

小学四年级是升学的关键期，等到孩子五六年纪的时，压力会比较大任务比较多，所以小学四年级是允许父母给孩子进行一定程度的训练的。同时四年级进行有效训练会减轻孩子后两年的升学压力，有利于孩子的健康成长。最后在孩子的写作过程中，一定一定要保持耐心，观察孩子写作中反应的思维方式，然后根据这个去激发孩子看待世界，描述世界的新角度。

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